Summerland

Time drips

through a crack

in the roof,

collecting

in metal pails

called days.

4 responses to “Summerland”

  1. Very thought-full concept concretely expressed. Good work.

  2. Interesting format… is this a type of poetry?

    1. Heh heh, not really…it’s just free-verse. Brief free-verse with purposeful line breaks.

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