Time drips
through a crack
in the roof,
collecting
in metal pails
called days.
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Julie Israel
Time drips
through a crack
in the roof,
collecting
in metal pails
called days.
Very thought-full concept concretely expressed. Good work.
Many thanks 🙂
Interesting format… is this a type of poetry?
Heh heh, not really…it’s just free-verse. Brief free-verse with purposeful line breaks.