Julie Israel

Summerland

Time drips

through a crack

in the roof,

collecting

in metal pails

called days.

Julie Israel

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4 responses to “Summerland”

  1. indytony Avatar
    indytony

    Very thought-full concept concretely expressed. Good work.

    Reply
    1. Julie Israel Avatar
      Julie Israel

      Many thanks 🙂

      Reply
  2. JodetteP Avatar
    JodetteP

    Interesting format… is this a type of poetry?

    Reply
    1. Julie Israel Avatar
      Julie Israel

      Heh heh, not really…it’s just free-verse. Brief free-verse with purposeful line breaks.

      Reply

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